All Comments on 'Tit for Tat'

I found it a very interesting story and would love to read another chapter.

Does this alien have a brother???

A very HOT story. More please!!

Well, I guess we don't know for sure what the creature's nature is, but at least you can't RULE OUT tentacle sex!

Way to go!

That was great - and, like others have said, I'd love to read more - please keep writing

More! Must have more! That was excellent!

You made me laugh, and feel upbeat. Her mood got my creative juices running ;) I love the way his invisibility made me imagine him however I wanted. Please let him have a voice! Please! And make it sexy. Thanx for the lift. Also please take her to his planet ;) ...if he has one... Again endless possiblities! Brilliant, witty and most feminine and motherly. Make her a warrior protector for her mate and let her rescue him in the next installment. *sigh* From another virgin damsel in distress ;)

more that was amazing, like the other guy said invisability made it very erotic...more! please

That story was friggin awesome. I, and many other readers as well, would love to read a "chapter 2" from this story!

Keep up the good work.

I wish I could trade places with the main character...

More please.

I read this over and over again! You're a great writer...very creative!

make a second one!!