All Comments on 'To Be The Last Ch. 04'

Love it! Nooo! She cant be dead! That would be so sad! Please post more! OOh and please post more of blood moon! I love your stories! Cant wait for more! Thanks!!

oh god no after making us wait so long for this wonderful part you go and make matters worse with that twist at the end. i guess you either want to make this really long or don't believe in happy endings, hopefully its the former.

Anyways i eagerly await the next chapter

nooooooo.... tell me its a lie

you have to hurry with the next chapter!!!!!! i couldn't keep my eyes off til i was done!!! PLEASE HURRY!!!!!!!!!

I am crying my eyes out over here! Please tell me that it's a lie!

I love it!!! But, it has got to be a lie.. got to be. cannot wait for the next chapter. Thank you so much for your comments too!!

Your writing is good, and so is your story. I would suggest more character building. This chapter didn't have much personality in it. Also Alex was very annoying, all she did was cry and act a bit spoiled. I wish she would become a bit more self-reliant and less weak.

Looking forward to the next installment.

I really liked this chapter, however I got confused by/was disappointed with Alex's easy acceptance that Blake is a agent for Dane all along and that Cara is her bodyguard...maybe I missed something.Will re-read 1-4 again, to see.

Regardsless of that, I'm on the edge of my seat with this one....pls update soon!

hehe, sorry, I don't know how to contact you to clarify. Alexia always knew Clara worked for her grandfather. She also knows about her grandfather's agency and what he does. I'll clarify more in the next chapter as to why Alex didn't make a big deal about Blake being an agent through the recollections of conversation with Alexia from the other characters. I hope to wrap this story up in a couple more chapters. Thank you everyone for your patience and I apologize for taking so long. Family issues came up and I've been busy with that. Hope everyone has a great day.

-aaddicted

The suspense is killing me!!!!! Please tell me you haven't abandoned the story!

Just read the update on your bio. You've got more important things to deal with and I can definitely understand that. Take your time and I'll be waiting patiently (I hope!) for the next chapter!

That chapter completely broke my heart. I'm just hoping it's all a really well-written lie, and Alexia and baby are both alive and well. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

I'm begging you now! Please update!!!

i really love this story.. it's great, but i'm hoping matthew was just lying to blake to get him to leave :( the end of this chapter was definitely a tear-jerker.

beautiful story, does Alexia really die? loved it, can't wait for the next chapters!

You have to finish this! I can't wait to see how it ends!!

Lots of surprises in this chapter. If I didn't know the story kept going, I'd be really mad at you!