All Comments on 'To Protect and Serve Ch. 04'

i love your work its awesome and this story is so cool. im not in to the bsdm all that much but you make it work for this story.

I'm glad you're back and this one is off to a great start i have been hoping you would write something new having read most of your stories a dozen times or more each keep it comeing as always you rock

to proofread your work, and know that I'm reading the story ahead of the others, lol. Keep the chapters coming!

As always. Hot, sweet and scary in just the right amounts.

Well done.

Not really normaly into these kind of stories, but i love the way this one works. Very strong characters and story, what more could we want? oooh I know, more chapters ;) please keep up the writing.

this is phenomenal. I love her fear of spiders, it adds a realism to the character.

Flawless victory as usual.

This is pretty damn good. It's the little details that I enjoy the most, for example, Clyde, who I imagine is big as a horse, keeps longhaired cats which he must love a lot because they need much attention. The juxtaposition tickles my funny bone. It is just one example of a lot of great dialog. I really enjoy the characterization as well; I can understand Shamira's relationship with her sister and her growing relationship with Clara and the rest of Shane's crew.

One thing that I have trouble justifying to myself is they all seem to talk the same way. They all feel like they use the same specific diction and tone based on their role/what they're doing right now. This might just be me reading poorly or with little imagination.

The juicy bits are not particularly to my taste through no fault of the author (I'm slightly more tame) so please pardon me if I skim them and enjoy the rest of the writing.

i have read all the stores on his page sevral times but it doesnt look like there will ever be anything new from him deadmans world breathless and to protect n serve are 3 of my favrites all of his stories are worth another read.

This is a fun read! I'm having a great time.

The scary little things like spiders or crocs or snakes or cockroaches or even having a vampire sister ....... Just little disturbing stuff ...... Fabulous

Have to say I love the story line but the sex is overdone (and boring) and I find myself skipping over large parts of the text in order to get on with the story. Turned a solid 5 into a marginal 3.