All Comments on 'To Rise Again Ch. 05'

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nomoretears00nomoretears00over 12 years ago
yay!

Hehe, got an idea now that he's there Eithen isn't gonna want to let him leave, lol!

RahtidRahtidover 12 years ago

i enjoy your writing but you chapters are too short...hopefully the next chapter will be out soon and much longer...

cliffgirl08cliffgirl08over 12 years ago
More than meets the eye

You mentioned a partial shift in the last chapter and mates, etc. in this one, so I'm thinking this story is about to take a strange turn. Exciting.

Gene63Gene63over 12 years ago
Too Short!!!

The chapters are great...just too short!!! I get going good and then it is the end!!! I do love the story so far!!!

fukmi_allnitefukmi_allniteover 12 years ago

Need to know more about the image flashes...

julrijulriover 12 years ago
Okay Im ready to flip

We got tossed a chicken wing this time, when i was ready for steak. I still have no clue who, what , where, or when and its killing me. LOL! good chapter though but i am going to pout and say its too short damn it. Someone grow some hair or something. i'm praying for a full moon soon so I know we are talking werewolves. GASP! can it be? Lol.. anyway all kidding aside good chapter. MORE!

J~

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
wish.....

the chapters were longer and/or submitted closer together.

Like this story line, just don't like the waiting. I'm impatient :o) when it comes to stories that I am trying to keep up with. Can't wait too long for the happy ending I hope Eithen & River get.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

AAAAAAARRGGHHH, NEED MOREEE! Haha, great story. Keep on writing away.

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