by squeeker78
I wait and wait for the next chapter and then it ends I love the way this is developing
You are killing me. The chapters are way too short and just as I settle into reading the story it ends. Please write longers chapters.
I'm with Anonymous...it just gets going and then it stops...the chapters need to be longer!!! I love this story other than that!!!
Native American Shamans, Dream Walkers, Eithen showing up in the dreams.... oh man, this is good!
This is frustrating. This time it wasn't enough to whet my appetite. Still hungry for more.
stop fucking DRAGGING THIS OUT.....FIND THE KID SO THE BOYS CAN FUCK.....