All Comments on 'To Serve & Protect: Night Watch'

by patricia51

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sarahsnowssarahsnowsover 20 years ago
GREAT JOB

I've met good officers and bad officers- and officers- like the ones in this story- where doing the right thing was important- and the fact that it might cost his- or her- life didn't matter. I enjoyed the story- and particularly liked the end. Keep it up!

doormousedoormousealmost 20 years ago
Fantastic, Awesome, OMG!!!!

It's so rare to find stories on this site that are so perfectly written, totally captivating from start to finish!

I was wondering how the sex scene tied in at first but you wrapt it up expertly. A happy ending to a fantastic story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Perfectly riveting-absolutely divine

I loved every word. It was put together beautifully. Lovingly written and lovingly read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
There are angels

Good over evil, right giving wrong the smack down. I am,a sucker, for it ever time. Even in this format.

rgraham666rgraham666about 19 years ago
Nothing…

like a decent firefight to get the blood moving first thing in the morning.

Wish I had a guardian angel looking over me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Outstanding Story

WOW. You had it all. I couldn't stop reading. Love, hate, battles fought and won. Redemption and Miracles. Will you continue with these Charaters?

Thanks for a great read.

Herkeyfan_c130@yahoo.com

PEA1PEA1about 14 years ago
Fabulous

Fabulous. that;s all.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
I've read everything twice, beautifully written. I love you Patricia!!!...XD

XOxOxOxOX

Eh, if you could track me down-please don't arrest me for lying about my age...I did it just for you luv..;3

~Klown

Cindy1001Cindy1001over 1 year ago

I'm always a little shy and reserved with respect to the supernatural, but I liked this twist!

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