by patricia51
I've met good officers and bad officers- and officers- like the ones in this story- where doing the right thing was important- and the fact that it might cost his- or her- life didn't matter. I enjoyed the story- and particularly liked the end. Keep it up!
It's so rare to find stories on this site that are so perfectly written, totally captivating from start to finish!
I was wondering how the sex scene tied in at first but you wrapt it up expertly. A happy ending to a fantastic story!
I loved every word. It was put together beautifully. Lovingly written and lovingly read!
Good over evil, right giving wrong the smack down. I am,a sucker, for it ever time. Even in this format.
like a decent firefight to get the blood moving first thing in the morning.
Wish I had a guardian angel looking over me.
WOW. You had it all. I couldn't stop reading. Love, hate, battles fought and won. Redemption and Miracles. Will you continue with these Charaters?
Thanks for a great read.
Herkeyfan_c130@yahoo.com
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Eh, if you could track me down-please don't arrest me for lying about my age...I did it just for you luv..;3
~Klown
I'm always a little shy and reserved with respect to the supernatural, but I liked this twist!