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cosmiclizcosmiclizover 15 years ago
Name switching confusing

The main character seemed to have changed names during the story a couple of times to Laura from Karen. It was a little distracting trying to figure out who Laura was.

ReefkeeperReefkeeperover 15 years agoAuthor
Oops!

Oops! I wrote another story about Laura and had just finished editing it when I wrote this. I'll fix it!

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