All Comments on 'Together'

Could have used a little more intro to the girls.. Are they married, are they long time girlfriends, alittle background would have made the story all the better..

Hi Mr/Ms Anonymous -- I wish I'd taken the time to put some notes on this but it's a drabble not a complete story. Sometimes a muse just hits you with a scene without telling you who they are and what they're all about. These two characters were just about the sex. I'm sorry that it wasn't more well developed.

I liked it, I agree with the others that it could have used a bit more to it than just this scene but I liked it none the less.

~*~ Sapphire Fairy ~*~