All Comments on 'Together Again'

Nicely done. Very sweet and well written. Thank you.

In your bio you hope we enjoy your writing. Enjoy is nowehere near a strong enough word to describe what I feel about it. My word is my title!

I'm not just referring to this piece, but your writing in general and overall; you're a talented writer. What I particularly enjoy is the way in which you draw the reader in until it seems as if we are almost sitting on your lap, well I can but hope.

I am starting to write for Lit and hopefully I can persuade you to read my stuff as it gets on the site. More importantly though is how can I persuade you to reply, so that we can keep in touch? Any suggestions please send to london_james2010@yahoo.co.uk

Thanks a lot and best of luck

James

PS What I can see of it the photo looks fantastic too, what lips

Fuck you're good!

Keep'em coming, darling!

You're now a favourite!

:0)

this story was amazing! it was great! so loving and gentle, so seductive. i wish you would have continued this story. great job, your an amazing writer

We both owe you a lot. We're still together.

Part 2 please ?

Pretty please?

her not having and him not providing. TK U MLJ LV NV

Please post a part 2?

Please Part 2!!!!

Ok, I've read my way down every story. Each are great in their own way. But this one needs some more. Even if it's just one page. Please?!

Truely lovely story I really had to get tissues ( for crying )

When can we see a pt2

trapped by your story😭😭👍

btw she was so cute . i mean that girl " Truely lovely story I really had to get tissues ( for crying )