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svenjollysvenjollyalmost 14 years ago
Interesting beginning

Very interesting! Can't wait to see where you go with it.

eagelwolfeagelwolfalmost 13 years ago
Strangely jerky...

Weird, jerky and confusing just like a Japanese comic. I liked it.

jeff_djeff_dalmost 12 years ago
You write what you know…

… and you do it damned well; phrasing; tone; not taking yourself too seriously and respecting your characters; and using the feelings and reactions of your characters to make jokes while always maintaining that respect for your characters and the reader. Keep this up and you'll go far, if you haven't already.

sotarosotaro5 months ago

Really enjoyed your tale!

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