All Comments on 'Tom and Luke's Third Year Pt. 02'

As usual, I find myself enjoying this unusual story, for some reason. I think it's because I honestly like all the characters in the story. Despite the rather upscale language, they feel real. One minor point. There were several instances where you mixed up Luke's & Tom's names. Not often, but it does interrupt the flow of the story. I'll look forward to the next volume.

I know that I do it, because of the way that I switch narrators, and it's very easy to write the wrong name. I've corrected some already of course, but I was probably in too much of a rush to post this installment. I will try and make all the necessary corrections before it gets to the E-book stage. But I'm so glad that you like the story, many people don't and I fear that the religious element may put some people off. Although I write to please myself, it's good that at least a few others like what I write. Thank you!

great story .,have fallen for this whole series of stories.as time is passing it is getting more interesting to find out what happens next.