All Comments on 'Tom Billionaire Ch. 03'

Where is it???? Where's the rest????? I need it now!!!

Please!

Loving the whole Billionaire series, can't wait for the next chapter.

New chapters are normally up at http://storiesonline.net/story/63725 a couple of days before they're available on lit... Evil cliff hanger at the end of chapter 5.

Suspense suspense. You got us in your grip. 5 star grip

You killed little John and Taylor can't have more oh no your a mean son of a gun. Good ups and downs in this chapter except I don't think he would have hurt Taylor not if he really loves her. This is the most emotional book in the series. Thanks for all your work

With the exception of maybe one other guy, you are the best author on Literotica.

I can seriously say I wasn't expecting that twist but well done. I was wondering what would make John go and hide in Greece but this I wasn't expecting. Of course I should have expected it, what breaks up a marriage better than the death of the child?

Just never stop writing. Your Billionaire and the Ultimate Playboy series' are some of best I've ever read.

JJ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved this series, but unfortunately even though I made it this far I won't be able to finish it. :-( I have a problem when an author kills off a child.

I don't think Taylor can take anymore. And if she does, she is probably THE ANGEL. Made me cry with just that last sentence. Great writing but very emotional. I wish nobody ever has to go through what Taylor went through.

I really like this series and I understand this is fiction but man, killing the child! We just have enough bad things happening to children in this world that it puts me in a funk 😒 when authors kill children in stories for shock affect.

Jeez!! Honestly, I believe just about enough has happened to Taylor. Pick on someone else for fuck sake...

I don't know if the foreshadowing is really good or If I have caught onto your story telling patterns or if I just have telepathy skills, but I have guessed basically what was going to happen throughout the past 2 books.. As soon as Taylor not being able to have anymore children was brought up a couple of times, I knew something was going to happen to JJ.. I thought it was going to be the rash though...