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All Comments on 'Tommie's First'

by nighthawk22204

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AzPilotAzPilotover 14 years ago
I really enjoyed it--a very good read.

Thank you, sir, for a good story and a smooth plot. Well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Young Author

The author writes like he is very young and 'inexperienced'. With time he will get better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Definitely seems to be written by a youth

50 for effort.

btw, 7 inch cock = large, NOT "really really" large

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Spelling mistake

Thru, you might want to change that to Through* :P

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 13 years ago
Young love

Rousing story. Oh, to be young like Tommie again. I recall those days well--you've brought back some good memories.

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Almost never too busy to read, too often too busy to write, hate to see misspellings, run-on paragraphs, 2nd person narratives, but we all have our preferences. Mine tend to be Asian females. 32 years in Army service including hookups in Guam, Korea, Japan, Manila, Bangkok and...