by AJ_Watson
A conniving daughter is not a story I prefer. Couldn't get through half a page.
also when she put her foot in his lap in the presence of his wife
Interesting, good pacing and hot situations. Deserves a continuation.
Love the whole thing! What does she plan to do with the video? I hope you continue this story. If not, continue writing.
I want to see more of her getting her way with her "father" hehe! Claire is sexy!
This guy is TOAST! I just can't believe what an idiot he was portrayed as in this tale. I've seen lemmings with more self preservation instinct than this fellow has. He needs to wire himself for 'sight & sound' when he's going to be around his darling daughter-in-law. Good luck pal....
In story he seemed a little passive and weak, when daughter gets bored he is history, he needs a good ass kicking for fucking up his life.
Perfect ending to one of the most erotic stories I have read in awhile.
This one really needs to be resolved. Divorce, murder, polygyny are possibilities, but your devious mind will come up with another. Keep it up, you're good.
You need to somehow trick the step-daughter, tie her up when her Mommy is not around, and make a Mommy out of her, maybe using Ectasy so she doesn't remember anything....
i hope there will be a second chapter on this one, love to see what happens with the family.
thanks sarah