All Comments on 'Tongue Tail'

Boring. Concept was hot, I got hard and, since I LOVE eating ass and having mine eaten, I had hoped it would be a hot tale of erotic tongue fucking, but instead, it was a dime store romance novel which caused my throbbing election to retreat, knowing full well it'd never get what it wants here.

One of the very best Lit stories I have read, in any genre.

Tongue training, its a fantastic story, just exactly what I enjoy in bromance. Well done the details is supeb

This was an excellent story, not slow and boring at all, extremely hot, I loved it.

MORE PLEASE, MORE, MORE ,MORE!!!!!!!

Slow and boring. Quite sure sex with the author would be a snooze fest, too.

and well-written..please add to it soon!

I do appreciate the comments from those who've taken the time to offer them. It's certainly nice to know an impression has been made, and I'm hoping I'll get more responses/criticism on this one. I hope too, you'll excuse my influencing the vote, but I do think it's a pretty hot story.

A continuation of this "tail" is in the works.

bps

for chapt 2

for chapt 2

Damn fine writing. Hope you will continue.