All Comments on 'Too Good To Be True'

I can honestly say that this story was not what I thought it would be! Damn! This could be a movie even! I didn't see any of that coming! Great story, great writing! I will definitely be looking out for the next part!! Wow!

Awesome!!!

Sorry, I rated this story low so people wouldn't think it was a good idea to read. If there was a second part, maybe it would have been.

Wow! wasn't expecting that ending. It was a wonderful story. In the next chapter you could have Luke find Carlos and Angelica and make their lives living hell. :) GREAT STORY!!