All Comments on 'Tormented Ch. 08'

..i HATE YOU!!!!!!!!

I'm crying too this is soooo sad but sexy at the same time. First time I've cried for a story here

Well it seems everyone who reads this is pretty much moved to tears, but there is something I'm confused about. I thought Aaron could only live as long as Ryan did. Why didn't Ryan's death cause his follower to die too? Aaron did tell Lily that she'd been saving both of them all those years she stayed away from him. I'm also confused as to why Ryan told Lily that Abdiel was dead when clearly he wasn't and what Lily's father has to do with all this.

I hope you're able to update again soon.

Like everyone else this chapter had me in tears but like FeFe428 I am curious as well. Because Aaron didn't die is this your cheeky way of telling us Ryan isn't really dead? If his life keeps Aaron alive then he must still be alive right? And have been trying for ages to guess what's so special about her father, you really know how to build suspense!

So glad to hear you're writing again and can't wait for the next chapter!

Another five stars from me!

This story has had me crying,laughing and scratching my head all at the same time! Its so sad...but a real turn on! Can't wait for the next chapter. And I hope Ryan is not truely dead. And I also hope Aaron doesn't have to die to bring Ryan back! Please get the next chapter to us soon! :D

i am so glad that you are back and writing!! i thought that maybe you had given up on lily and ryan :( loved this last chapter and cant wait to see what you have in store for your characters! good to have you back Fallen!!!!!

p.s. i think i have a tiny crush on you ;)

Once again I just want to say thank you to everyone for reading and sticking by Lily and Ryan, fefe428 everything will be answered soon and I hope you enjoy the next installment :) of course all comments are welcome and would love to hear your opinions on what you would like to happen in following chapters. Chapter 9 will be uploaded in the next couple of days, thank you again for sticking by me! Fallen <3

This is so interesting! I love it!