All Comments on 'Touch Me Again'

by franceska84

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nice Description

Nice description and intensity, worked well without having a background.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Very nicely done...erotically nostalgic

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Clever x

Well structured story with merit, in one page. And Apt titled plus. Continue in this vein, forever is an ocean or a large lake, where you have to work to get to each port. And mines lay, some tho that explode with honey or cash. Surprise or shock; or navigate round?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
beautifully written

i loved it. everything about it. it's flow, eroticism, and passion. such a beautiful job; it is obvious you have great talent.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Nice

Although it is all sex, it has elements of everyday romance in it. It is nice.

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