by franceska84
Nice description and intensity, worked well without having a background.
Well structured story with merit, in one page. And Apt titled plus. Continue in this vein, forever is an ocean or a large lake, where you have to work to get to each port. And mines lay, some tho that explode with honey or cash. Surprise or shock; or navigate round?
i loved it. everything about it. it's flow, eroticism, and passion. such a beautiful job; it is obvious you have great talent.
Although it is all sex, it has elements of everyday romance in it. It is nice.