All Comments on 'Tour Stop'

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nixongnixongalmost 13 years ago
GOOD

LOVED IT. HOW ABOUT A SEQUEL?

LittleTommyTudorLittleTommyTudoralmost 13 years ago
Great story

A great story from a very prolific writer. I rate stories on do they make me want to masturbate and if they make me have a great orgasm. Your stories is two for two.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
great story

would like to know how erin and justin started but i am just being selfish. *haha*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Husband Swap

The end of the stories implies that there is another story coming involving a husband swap. I HOPE to see that soon.

I ENJOYED this story, if there is more to this I would love to read it too.

PaulScottBarbarasSonPaulScottBarbarasSonalmost 13 years ago
Always a good idea, not one of your better executions

A guy having a threesome with his mom and aunt never gets old for me. So it is always a good idea for a story to me! But this story is off to a kind of clunky beginning compared to your other work. I think the story is worth a sequel, but with a tad more finesse.

sirhugssirhugsalmost 13 years ago
great story

would love a longer more detailed sex scene.

also- Kelli not having opportunities for a lesbian experiment? Hello- travelling on tour? Groupies at every stop?

but looking forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Where is the next chapter

What are you waiting for? This story has a little of everything in it.Please finish...

Turtle1952Turtle1952over 7 years ago
Hot story

please keep going with this one

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The story was ruined by the last couple sentences

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