by PogueMahone
Very interesting, I liked the way he interrogates her even if it was not push far enough to my taste. I would have liked to have him make here reveil her sexual life. However her spoken parts are not very good. She give in to easily and her text is not credible.
Really turned me on.Loved the thought that the plumber initially saw up her skirt to her panties without her knowing,wish that would happen to my wife!
Very Exciting....Cant wait to read more about Tracy & the Plumber....
good tale, but her name was forgotten at times, although still a good tale
I have always had a fantasy of being taken like this...this really got me warmed up. Thanks for the hot read
you need to read through your stories. This one switches from first to third person speech, names are changed and the dialogue is badly formed and presented, in my opinion of course.
It's amazing to see that stories like this are accepted when others are declined for 1 missing punctuation mark, REdiculous.
That said the idea was good i just got bored after the first page.
good story. HOWEVER, on the first page you referred to her as both mrs. willows and mrs. reed. mistakes like that really take away from the story. very distracting.
Extremely hot the way the story proceeds. From looking up her skirt at the beginning, to his oral assault on her panty covered pussy and the eventual fucking he gives Mrs. Willows. He really turned her into his personal cum dump when he flooded her married pussy with his potent young spunk.
You've got a cute cervix????? Yeah, you lost me with that line. Totally pulled me out of the story
ARE YOU GOING TO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER???
DOES THE PLUMBER DOMINATE MRS WILLOWS AGAIN???
TIME TO REVISIT IT AND WRITE AGAIN