All Comments on 'Tracy and the Plumber'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wow

That was excellent-perfect!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Not Bad

Very interesting, I liked the way he interrogates her even if it was not push far enough to my taste. I would have liked to have him make here reveil her sexual life. However her spoken parts are not very good. She give in to easily and her text is not credible.

maturelvrmaturelvrover 18 years ago
My wife

Really turned me on.Loved the thought that the plumber initially saw up her skirt to her panties without her knowing,wish that would happen to my wife!

wa_tonywa_tonyover 18 years ago
Great Story

Very Exciting....Cant wait to read more about Tracy & the Plumber....

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
mrs Reed or mrs Willows

good tale, but her name was forgotten at times, although still a good tale

ps7468ps7468over 14 years ago
Really liked your story

I have always had a fantasy of being taken like this...this really got me warmed up. Thanks for the hot read

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
?

does the plumber ever come back???

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
good idea but....

you need to read through your stories. This one switches from first to third person speech, names are changed and the dialogue is badly formed and presented, in my opinion of course.

It's amazing to see that stories like this are accepted when others are declined for 1 missing punctuation mark, REdiculous.

That said the idea was good i just got bored after the first page.

mariasmdmariasmdover 13 years ago
okay

good story. HOWEVER, on the first page you referred to her as both mrs. willows and mrs. reed. mistakes like that really take away from the story. very distracting.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Very very hot

Extremely hot the way the story proceeds. From looking up her skirt at the beginning, to his oral assault on her panty covered pussy and the eventual fucking he gives Mrs. Willows. He really turned her into his personal cum dump when he flooded her married pussy with his potent young spunk.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

You've got a cute cervix????? Yeah, you lost me with that line. Totally pulled me out of the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
NEXT CHAPTER

ARE YOU GOING TO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER???

DOES THE PLUMBER DOMINATE MRS WILLOWS AGAIN???

TIME TO REVISIT IT AND WRITE AGAIN

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