All Comments on 'Trading Secrets Ch. 03'

When is chapter 4?! Is the series over? I have been waiting 2 years. Please tell me this isnt it.

I honestly had stopped working on it after all this time because I've actually been writing and publishing novels now, so that's what I'm putting all of my work into.

I actually am close to finishing the proofing stage of Kevin and Andrew's origin story, which is set to publish really soon. I had forgotten all about Trading Secrets, and maybe I'll pick it back up once Kevin and Andrew's story is published. I might have re-written it about three times already. By now, my writing ability has improved, and it might be interesting to utilize new skills in the following chapter, or even start a new story.

If you (or anyone else) is interested in Kevin and Andrew's saga, it begins here:

http://thorncreations.com/books/never-mind-genetics/

In the meantime, I'll try to come up with a good fourth chapter for Trading Secrets. It might be fun to come back to it!

I really enjoyed reading it all!!

You know how to write stories!!

Got me really in to it!

I was missing some sexual adjectives and

Characteristics descriptions- sizes, colors

How do the charachters look like ..

And um i was expecting the brothers to join in

While watching.. Horny men dont think straight :p

I hope you do chapter 4 it was so hot but I felt bad for Andrew

2 chapters a 5 and have glowing reviews. I didn’t rate this. Unfortunately the writer decided to leave his readers high and dry and go write something else. Not a nice thing to do. I’m tempted to give it a1, but I’ll wait and see if the writer responds. Really bites it when you’re left on the edge of a good story.