All Comments on 'Train Ride'

Beautifully written. You pull the reader in wondering what the connection is, delivery a highly erotic coupling ending in an amazing romantic "beginning". I'm a sucker for happy endings, even if I am a hetero male who also likes action movies and James Bond novels (lol).

Keep up the good work.

OMG so erotic and arousing. I loved reading every line and I want to save it in my memory.

Wow. Totally engrossing, beautifully written and an 11 on the erotic meter. Keep up the good work.

I never print stories of literotica, except this one, so I could take it to bed with me. wonderful story Alex.

Love from Ruthey (ruthnz60@hotmail.com)

A very sincere, romantic and sexy story. We all have dreams and fantasies. If they ever come true I should hope that it will be just like this.

Just beautiful! The story I would like to live.

It would be great if you continued the story line.

...fantasies are made of these.

love all the reincarnations of this couple.

more please. ;0)

I've read all your stories and they r all amazing

The story created here actually felt longer than 2 pages. Some how through your vivid telling you have given us so much more. I am genuinely puzzled as to how that can be but appreciate it none the less. Thank you for sharing you beautiful works.

A crispy short one but extraordinary ....... I would like to experience such extremity or better happiness ...... Wonderful

Wow!,,,,,

im falling in love with the way you unravel a mystery ..souls meeting their other half.. this is my thing :)