All Comments on 'Training Day'

Nothing erotic happened in this story but the stage is set for further developments, as the last sentence says, "over the next six months."

I hope this is what you're planning but I'm surprised the story is not titled "Part 1" or "Chapter 1" if that's the case.

Not fair; it is only an introduction, does not belong to the class of "erotic couplings". Extend it first, and then republish it here under the same name.

Get cracking on the rest of it, Tub. We all wanna know what happens, already! :-)

Thanks for the feedback so far!  I know it needs more and there is plenty to share.  Time is the only enemy here.  For sure need a better title describing it as an intro, and better proofing.  My mistress tells me I'm good at taking direction and work hard on improving my performance!  I'll do better with chapter two!!!  :-)