All Comments on 'Training Kye'

by tis_mina

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Anonymousabout 17 years ago

I love this

I wish for you to write more on this story... i love reading this story...

notalwaysweak about 16 years ago

Beautifully evocative.

I love the world you've created here. You write so beautifully.

Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

GOOD, BUT

THE BEGINNING OF AN ENJOYABLE STORY MADE LESS SO BY NUMEROUS MISTAKES: WORD USAGE, SPELLING, FAILURE TO FORM COMPLETE SENTENCES, AND OTHER UNNECESSARY OMISSIONS. A GOOD EDITOR WOULD LIKELY HELP IMMEASURABLY IN RAISING THE OVERALL QUALITY OF THIS PROMISING STORY.

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