All Comments on 'Transformation Ch. 09'

I WOULD POINT OUT THAT A HYMN IS A SONG, WHILE A HEM/HEAM(?)

IS THE EDGE OF A SKIRT OR DRESS....... I STILL ENJOY YOUR STORY

AND HOPE THAT YOU WILL CONTINUE. THANK YOU FOR SHARING.

GUNRUNNER

I could just about kill you stopping before Sara got ravished. Just kidding, but I do hope Chapter 10 doesn't start off with Sara disentangling herself from the 2 girls effectively skipping this scene.

Also, sad to see Devin is leaving. The way the last two (?) chapters were heading I thought Devin and Jennifer would get together. Especially after Tiffany and Sara become a true couple .And Devin seems like a clone of Rick that Jennifer needed. Would have made a nice couple, the loves of Sara/Rick together.

Eagerly anticipating the next installment.

yes more chapters ,got to know what happens with sara and heather and tina please

As others have said and I will repeat - please continue. Great so far and wondering where the story goes from here.

Something is not right: all of a sudden Heather isn't a concern anymore. First everybody is on alert, arming themselves for a full out attack on the house, and next, they are discussing Sara's sexual orientations and they and in bed. Where is Heather all this time?

This is a really great series hope to see more chapters

I am not much into men so the threesome of the girls was very very nice!

I know its rude to ask a writer to control what they write but I hope you dont make Heather make too horrible of mess. Life is a terrible thing in reality, its nice to snuggle up with a chapter of your work and enjoy it.

You seem to be really getting a handle on the whole "being a spectacular writer" very well. If the world were not so prudish I could see you being the next JK Rowling with this story, it has a magical, wonderful feel to me, I imagine many men and women would love to experience such an exciting and unique life.

Please keep writing, not just this story but after it as well, you are a very skilled author and getting better and better.

did I miss ch. 10

how does sara dating a guy break that kind of control gandalf has over her? i mean earlier on she was afraid to a certain degree of tiffany and the level of control she had over sara. by now that is not an issue but the fact remains it isnt specifically guy related and i dont see how dating some random guy to get used to being, i guess, decent with them some how makes it better with all guys...especially if gandalf is all powerful