All Comments on 'Transformations'

by bumblegrum

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SharonsGirlSharonsGirlover 10 years ago
I Can't Read This

She divorces her husband because of his "unnatural" desires, then 7 years later becomes a sex slave to a guy and does whatever he desires?

Come on!

shuriken2012shuriken2012over 10 years ago
2 problems

there are two issues i have with your story. first, why would a husband that wants a lot of kids leave his only daughter? and secondly, to a woman as devoutly Christian as the one you painted, the idea of divorce would be absolutely repellent.

SharonsGirlSharonsGirlover 10 years ago
My Apologies

I got your Email, Bumblegrum, and you are right, I totally missed that in your intro.

Actually, I DO like Mind Control stories, so I WILL be reading this.

Thanks for getting back to me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Pretty god damn retarded. My IQ went down from reading this pile of crap

bumblegrumbumblegrumover 10 years agoAuthor
Negative IQ

Whoo hoo - I didn't realise that IQs could go into negative territory. Still, I guess that's what you should expect from people too gutless to show their name and hide behind anonymity.

Steve150177Steve150177about 10 years ago
Hints of Glenn having met her husband.

I saw 2 or 3 hints that Glenn was enslaving them on a "commission" from her ex.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Next Chapter?

This is a great story cant wait to read more, hope you have another chapter lined up soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is a rape story plain and simple

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