by bumblegrum
She divorces her husband because of his "unnatural" desires, then 7 years later becomes a sex slave to a guy and does whatever he desires?
Come on!
there are two issues i have with your story. first, why would a husband that wants a lot of kids leave his only daughter? and secondly, to a woman as devoutly Christian as the one you painted, the idea of divorce would be absolutely repellent.
I got your Email, Bumblegrum, and you are right, I totally missed that in your intro.
Actually, I DO like Mind Control stories, so I WILL be reading this.
Thanks for getting back to me.
Whoo hoo - I didn't realise that IQs could go into negative territory. Still, I guess that's what you should expect from people too gutless to show their name and hide behind anonymity.
I saw 2 or 3 hints that Glenn was enslaving them on a "commission" from her ex.
This is a great story cant wait to read more, hope you have another chapter lined up soon.