All Comments on 'Transforming Daughter-in-Law Pt. 02'

by L. Cadarn

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
better

It would have been a hell of a lot better ending if Greg had killed the son of a bitch that had sired him. He wasn't his father, after all, but the sperm donor that had impregnated his mother.

Another good ending would have been greg getting a kitchen knife and cutter the balls and cock pff the evil fucker, and throwing his body in the alley by a hospital ER.

Gary

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
A Japanese Woman's Dream

Great story! Can't wait to read the rest! Obviously now a cock-hungry slut, hope to read about Hiroko's adventures with groups of well-hung black men!

big9_11104big9_11104almost 20 years ago
Hey, Missouri!

Get a sense of humor!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Where are the next chapters?

Want more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
after effects

marty certainly did a job on daughter in law, and greg probably is only willing to go so far. open yes to more, but to what she had become? an appetitie that can't be managed by greg, and when he finds she needs more? oh well, he'll get a sexual stimulation from it,then poof from her

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
woman

I wish I was a woman and had a father in law who would turn me into a slut,

Anonymous
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