All Comments on 'Transwood High Pt. 02'

by BoobVillian

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oldnornryoldnornryalmost 10 years ago
Fasinating

That was so intriguing I'll have to read ch.1.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Piece Of Shit

This story sucks, give up now, you have no talent for this type of writing. I can't believe literotica permitted this garbage to be posted. What a waste of time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

cool more chapters

BoobVillianBoobVillianalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Feedback

Thanks for the good feedback, and Anonymous User, if its that bad why did you read all of it? And please, submit a story then I will give my views on your literary skills.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Very nice

I think it is time for mommy to get some from son and daughter.

2ezgoin2ezgoinalmost 10 years ago

Yup! Mommy and Chloe need a little attention! And I'd bet that big brother's gonna help. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
needs pacing. but awesome

a lot of fun. linger a little in sensation a nd emotion. check out FINC. He does a great job with humiliation.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
I can definitely appreciate your type of writing. Looking forward to more :)

The haters are wrong, man. This is hot as hell.

BoobVillianBoobVillianalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Feedback

Anyone who wants to discuss story or have a chat feel free to email: r3dp0150n at hotmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Sweet!

Cant wait for the next part!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Oh Yea!

Fuck yea! More!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
more!!!!

More! More more!!!!! Make her show her mother and those bullies who's boss!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
finish it

for gds sakes will finish the stories driving me nuts waiting for you to finish

the stoies hury up and finish it

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