All Comments on 'Trapped'

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greeneyeredheadgreeneyeredheadalmost 19 years ago
wow !!!

Grins ... right off the bat I have a thing for elevators ... but your story was hot regardless of the setting ... THANKS for publishing and sharing!!!

Green

soccergrrlsoccergrrlalmost 19 years ago
Another great one!

Descriptive with a love for the language, a rarity, in my opinion. One can make love or fuck with words, and snicks is quite good at the wordplay for desired effect.

Great descriptions of the heat that builds before and during lovemaking. A great job!

DelectatioDelectatioalmost 19 years ago
Fantastic

Great one snicks! It's a powerful setting combining the fear of being trapped with sexual desire. It builds up the tension to an explosive climax!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
WOW!

A great little erotic romance. Thank You. Ronnie W.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
another gem

well, snicks, I didnt know you had such a flourish....grins...was a very stimulating story..blush...hope you write many more...hugggs snicks....from Aroused

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great Job

This is great Snicks. I enjoyed it a lot.

Welshie

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