by snicks
Grins ... right off the bat I have a thing for elevators ... but your story was hot regardless of the setting ... THANKS for publishing and sharing!!!
Green
Descriptive with a love for the language, a rarity, in my opinion. One can make love or fuck with words, and snicks is quite good at the wordplay for desired effect.
Great descriptions of the heat that builds before and during lovemaking. A great job!
Great one snicks! It's a powerful setting combining the fear of being trapped with sexual desire. It builds up the tension to an explosive climax!
well, snicks, I didnt know you had such a flourish....grins...was a very stimulating story..blush...hope you write many more...hugggs snicks....from Aroused