All Comments on 'Trapped... Ch. 04'

Glad your back, I won't kill you, even though your being evil, cause then I wouldn't get to know more of the story.

After so long, a new chapter! Yay!

Now I want more >.< I'll wait though.

Great!

Had to re-read b/c though I remembered the major points, I couldn't remember tons. I hope the next chapter comes sooner than this one did, but I'm glad you didn't abandon it. I hate when you read a story and it doesn't get finished, so thanks.

There was one mistake where you meant to write the heading saying it was Virgil's POV and you wrote Vincent by mistake.

The chapter itself was good. I liked the descriptions of the place they stayed. I thought it was pretty risky to stay at a stop so close to where they were imprisoned for two days, but I can understand their having to rest up. I wonder what was wrong with Thistle when he was looking so bad as they got to the town? I would have recommended they not hold hands b/c that brought more attention to them. If they hadn't, it may have reduced the chance people would take enough notice to remember them when word gets out.

I'm wondering why Virgil still isn't powerful enough, after blood and rest, to open a portal. What else does the scythe do? Does he still want a weapon even with that? I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I need more of this series. PLEEEAAASSE!!!!!!!!!!

I havent been writing much of trapped, I'm working on some others, trying to get a lot on them before i start posting them, there are at least 1 that will turn into a gu male one but mostly they're straight >.< working on it xD ~icy

Sorry for practally dying xD ive got a new job that eats up my time, still behind on trapped but i have a few others almost ready so, hopefully ill find a nice cliff to drop yall off of again xD ~icy

3/7/15 im still alive, i swear XD sorry for being so silent for so long but ive been busy as hell, though ive got a few interesting stories that are swirling and please email me ^^ i love getting new ideas shadowwalker4436@gmail.com - Icy ^-^

Your stories are amazing

Please finish this, I've been Re reading it for almost a year