All Comments on 'Travelers'

Wonderfully written story. Excellent set up of the characters and background. Makes it more exciting and erotic to know that it is essentially a true story.

Looking forward to subsequent chapters.

You have a definite talent. That was a very erotic and wonderfully written story. Excellent character development.

But you two are or were immature, and didnt fight fair with one another, and the first infidelity was astounding how quickly you gave up your marriage vows. Jeremy is not an innocent in this, as you write, but the wife is always the standard bearer for the marriage, or should be, and you set the standard quite low.

Too much time in the moon for this author definitely has not helped her.

I would have rated it 5 * right up to the point where the married slut became a cheap whore.

At that very instant it ceased being an erotic story between two lovers and became a cliche that was a complete turnoff