All Comments on 'Tree planting'

This is a nicely (in both senses of the word) written story. Sensuous and intelligent with satisfying structure and overall lack of pretentiousness.

Well written, good character development. I really felt for the guys

Well developed scenario, friendship discovered, intimacy out of adversity, beautiful finale. So well written I feel I know their bodies.

More please.

Intense and believable, full of detail, and full of excitement as the realistic detail builds up and naturally ends where it does. I was overjoyed at the colouring ("The moon was waning, so its wedge was even thinner than the previous night.") and the delicacy and pace, showing how much you cared about the writing itself, without its getting slow or impairing the forward-moving sexiness.

A real writer! Someone who can use asyndeton with perfect precision: "The crew geared up, with their spades, their planting belts.", then three in a row ("None of the boys she'd been with had ever created feelings like this in her, aroused her in this way. She was amazed at how horny she was, how hot she could be. Her pussy felt hot, wet, like she was filled with liquid gold.") and all entirely natural and balanced. Lovely.

It took a while to get to the good part, but it was worth it once I arrived.

Nice setting of the scene, development of the characters, and buildup toward the sexual climax. A couple of little things like missing words here and there, but certainly nothing to overwhealm the quality of the storytelling.

Awesome story. Hope there is more to come !!!!

Erotic, interesting, informative and well written. I'll never look at a forest the same way again!

Lovely and well written, I wish it were a tad longer.