All Comments on 'Tricked & Treated'

A winner!

I loved this story. So erotic, naughty, romantic and touching. Speaking of touching.....

Thank you for writing this.

Great story...I like the time you took getting into the action and how you kept it very realistic, not moving too fast or just jumping into sex as if the guy wouldn't know anything!

Good job!

Wow! Thank you for such a creative and well written story. I loved the background given to the characters and the emotional aspect of the coupling. Fantastic!

Tricked and treated me...thanks for the read...(~_*)

Totally believable, although those latex outfits rarely fit anyone "perfectly" on someone else.. lol great job!

What a tender and touching story! Excellent buildup and sensual tension along with top quality character creation. No short rush to the bed, instead we get a good view of their past and that great rush of "I've got to try this or I'll regret it forever" inspiration!

My thanks for such a wonderful story.

Kydreamer

It had Me smiling the whole time thank you.

Always, E

A truly beautiful, sensual, love story. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It is erotic but warm deep love.

Nightowl21

a wonderful experience. hope there is a follow up to the story

This had all the elements that I look for in an Erotic Story. A well thought out plot. Very well written. And the erotic scenes paced realistically enough to make me wonder is this fact or fiction? My lover and I like to take turns reading a sexy story to each other at the end of a long day. This will be the one that I'll be tucking him in with ( referring to me not the bed ) tonight. Thanks L.L.

Excellent erotic tension, and very good characterization. It made me tear up at the point when Monica started crying before the lights were turned on. Eliciting a reaction like that really takes some skill, and I applaud you. Moreover--there is some outstandingly described sex that melded with the context and chracterization beautifully. Congratulations on an excellent story.

Loved it. Great story.

Amazing story!!

All I can say is WOW!

I really enjoyed this story. I read it earlier today and decided to give it another look after I got home this evening. It's still incredible! The characters are wonderful, the emotion very moving, and the sex real. Thank you for sharing this story!

Sexy and well written. One of the best I've read

Hi! Loved the characters and the way that there was true love wound up in all that great sex! Going to go read your other stories!

Keep coming back to this story. I love it. It's one of the best so far. Good luck!

Superb writing, this is one of the longest Halloween contest entries, but repays repeated readings. Next to this, my Halloween entries are like a cake with the baking powder left out! Oh well, there's always next year....I think your story will be in the top 3!!

That was by far one of the best erotic stories I've ever read..Kudos to you dear..keep up the good work!!

Very sexy read. Great story, great sex.

Neon

This story will make anyone hot.

Makes me want to take my special one out for my love at any time. And at Halloween, we will play this game for sure.

Keep them coming.

Beautifully passionate, well crafted, great characters.. deliciously written imagery. I felt everything Mona and Mitch did as you expressed it for us. Reminded me of a simliar situation I've been in, and how good it felt to let the truth be shared and enjoyed. /purrs softly, very very well done. Am off to read more of your stories.

We just wanted to Thank everyone for taking the time to read, vote, and comment. We've been away for almost three years, so coming back and getting the kind of wonderful feedback we've received has really made us feel great!

We plan on digging in our heels here at Literotica and getting back into the swing of things. This has been a great start. Thanks again everyone for making us feel welcome. We really appreciate it.

Bob and Becky

Just glad to see you posting again. I've read all your stories, and haven't been disappointed yet. Be looking forward to anything more you post.

Loved it! It made me wet my panties!

This is my favorite story. Thank you so much. Every time I read it, I get all teary-eyed and my husband gets a great night!