All Comments on 'Tricky Aunt Vicki'

If you're not underage, I'll eat my socks. You sure as hell write as if you never advanced beyond a grade-school education. Way too underwritten to be enjoyable. Even from a strictly "wack-off" point of view, it was lame, but from a 'literary' perspective (and this is 'lit'-erotica, after all), it's a friggin' drawing with crayons -- or a fingerpainting by a 'chump'-anzee.

Please Sir/Madam may we have another(chapter)

Please continue with more of this story. I found it enjoyable.

Very nice story..I hope you have more in mind for her..as for the negative comment above..he's an idiot ..not all stories are great..but at least they need to leave comments to help you not affend you..keep up the good work you are doing a good job

R

Don't let the turkey's get you down. I liked it, but would have been even better if you had not pretended to stay asleep, instead, wake up and start playing with her breasts, suck her nipples and see how hard you can make them. Then show her you are a REAL man, flip her on her back and make her scream in ecstasy begging you for more.

That was an incredible story. Nevermind the Anon guy down below. Notice how they never leave their name and belittle other writers just for the audacity of putting something up? We'll never know the why's of their ideology. Even if there were no colorful expressions of literary performance, does not make it any less a work of art. Keep up the good, no, great work. Can't hardly wait for the next go 'round with Tricky Vicki.

Too bad there's no follow up story of what was in store for the next night...