All Comments on 'Trina'

A story that long and stopping it on a "I'm not sure of the outcome" note it NOT an ending. If you're gonna repost these things, at least make a fucking reason for doing so like finishing the fucking story.

I think it´s his way to make a revenge against his bad luck(3 failed marriages, right?) in your own life(something like the best ending is still to come).

Easy come, easy go, doesn't matter as long as the cheatin' one goes.

somewhere else? Hell the time in the restaurant I would have told her I knew about her and her brush cut mustache guy and laffed in her face. On the other end of the coin you write a lot of stories. To many stories to make typos, spelling errors, and grammar errors. Take the line. "I made it clear to him that all we were ever going to be was friends." This one of a few I caught in the story and some of them were bad enough to yank me off the train of throught. Spell check doesnt work when you spell the wrong word right. Get a proofreader or good editor.

I enjoyed reading the story, it was fast paced and told a lot of story in a short time. well done and thanks

I will vote on this when you finish it!

This one was not bad, fairly well-written, but it suffers from the already-mentioned (by other readers) weak and uncertain ending that leaves us hanging. It also seems that Rob is controlled by his cock. I can't fathom why he would have gotten back with Trina after several other lies on her part? She cheated on their relationship repeatedly with her old "flame" yet she and Rob had an understanding of exclusivity. It's like putting on an engagement ring -- living with someone, sharing expenses, sleeping together every night . . . after a number of years it would be a common-law marriage, and as far as I'm concerned, saying you love someone, saying you want to be with them all the time, and living the part means exclusivity unless discussed ahead of time to be otherwise. Trina wanted the stability and security of Rob and the love of her old boyfriend from school -- I think that's called having your cake and eating it too -- and this is like the cliche of "it's just sex, honey, get over it" we hear from a cheater. Or, looked at another way, we are bending the definition a bit when this story is put in the LW category -- Trina is not a wife, though she obviously would like to be. At least Rob stood up for himself and called a spade a spade at the end. Thanks for writing.

Fairly well written as usual JPB, but like your last posting an ending to the story seems to be lacking. Without one giving closure to the story, you really can't rate the story any higher than I have.

This character taken from JPB own life and his own ability to his Brainis is totally Unsympathetic. I was actually

HOPING trina got him to marry her and fucked him over the Divorce.

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No one loves stupid people Rob. 8 years of George W Bush should of made that clear by now.

better than what came before him and seems to be better than that that followed.

Here's the deal -- to write a good story you need a plot. This one had a reasonable plot: an unfaithful girlfriend. The pacing of the story was good as well. There was the requisite roller coaster ride of ups (he is happy with her) and downs (he doesn't want anything to do with her).

To second guess the author and say that what the protagonist did was illogical is subjectively petty. He fell in lust and maybe in love. He fell out of love, only to allow "little head" trump his "big head." And, finally, he did it a third and final time.

He may have some open questions, but that what just rhetorical musing by the protagonist for the benefit of the reader. In his heart of hearts he already knows the answers.

Good story, Bob. I spent a year in Michigan in and around the same area. It is fun to read the names of cities and certain streets that I had driven.

John.

He was lucky though. If he had married her he would have

had to divorce her sooner or later. I can understand how he could be enthralled by her and her gorgeous and really sexy manners, but he knew enough to not consider marrying her.

He really should have used a condom with her, and if she complained,---- just tell her, "he was not taking any more risks". That, of course, should provided a closed ending.

What is the difference between his relationship with Amy and his relationship with Trish? The second one was a lot more fun! If it was stupid, at least he had a lot of tail...

Nothing else to say.

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....you agree with Harry,- says it all.When Harry is right(sober?)- he is right on. But not "usually".So I can understand the inability to grasp the incompetent idiocy of the Bush Administration.-pistolpackinpete

fuck that bitch and move on. let her raise it alone

Nobody wins.

Well enough written to make me feel it.

In real life I'd have dealt with it differently, just as would all the other posters but, as has been said before, it's JPB's story so he can lead it where he will.

a sucker,will there be a 4th. TK U MLJ LV NV

I have to hope that over time, I learn something. How to change brakes. How to teach my son to throw a football properly. How to give my daughters advice on dealing with boys and men.

So why is it so different for someone to learn how not to be a cheater. ("Gee...I DON'T have to lie and I DON'T have to find and fuck someone else") One would think that learning how to be specifically inactive like that would be EASIER to learn.

So...while I do look askance at the main character, I can't really blame him. Trina...then six months...then Trina...and then a couple years and Trina again.

How much did you change in two years from college?

But some people just don't seem to want to learn...and at least he kept his eyes open both times. But it's a well documented fact that flaccid empty balls cause vision problems, sad to say.

Unfortunately in Hungary the husband must pay after all children which were born in the marriage after divorce. However according to the USA federal family law the exhusband does not have to pay any children suppoort money if the bastards (Not DNA test proof children) are below 4 years old after divorce. THIS IS THE BIGGEST ROMANTIC REVENGE STORY SITUATION, WHEN THE EXWIFE SHOULD BRING UP CHILDREN ALONE AND THE EXHUSBAND BRINGS UP HIS DNA TEST PROOF CHILDREN IN THE SECOND MARRIAGE AND THEY LIVES IN SAME MIDDLE TOWN..............What a pity the revenge story Authors use this seldom!

So Rob is a three-time loser. With the same girl. At least he found out the truth in the end. Not a great story but interesting.

Trina and Rob seem congenitally stupid. Trina is unable to choose between Rob and an ex- boyfriend whom her own mother calls "no account". Rob has caught Trina with the ex-bf twice when supposedly in a relationship with Trina and swallows her guff each time. Fool me once shame on you etc etc.

Good for u jpb.

Rob is a DUMBASS.

I think Sweetie's explanation of being with Martin is plausible. (Almost certainly not true, but we readers have more information than Fiancé did at that time!). In other words, the second time was just a continuation of the first time, because Fiancé kicked he out of her/his place. Why she would still be living with her (ex)friend after six months is tough to totally swallow, but her story was good (especially if Trina were better in the sack than Amy!)

Don't quite understand how she could be regularly screwing ( 'no-count loser) Martin if he was now living a hundred or more miles away! He doesn't sound like he has the resources to drive to her 3-4 days a week, and she doesn't have the time and still be cleaning Fiancé's clock a lot!

only a 1 until it is done.

No woman fucks good enough to be worth the heartburn that Trina causes and Rob is terminally stupid for continually buying into her drivel. She wants to fuck, oblige but give her absolutely nothing else. Considering marriage with such a lying tramp is insanity. Rob is too gullible to make the story interesting.

and now its a possible guillotine for the coup-de-gras...TK U MLJ LV NV

this story reminds me of the fable about a scorpion trying to cross a river. why cany some people learn from their mistakes.

Perfect comment mike I couldn't have siad it better

Mama Baby---Daddy Maybe...TK U MLJ LV NV

Rob's a masochist.

Thought I was reading a version of Groundhog Day for a moment.

At least the dummy called mom to invite her to a wedding and got the wake-up call he constantly hated to think about.

A masochist...maybe...but just hopelessly stuck on her and looking for excuses to have her.

I give him credit for walking away twice but the poor guy had it bad for her. Unfortunately, he'll have feelings for her for the rest of his life and it will be difficult for him to finally fall in total love with another woman...so - good luck and - thanks to momma!

the scary thing about the story is there are people like him in the story that does it over and over again. they keep saying "oh he will change" or oh she's serious this time. It's sad really. it best to let go even if it is the person u love because u will be pull down and drown in a hell and never get out.

Damn but you divulged. Thank you for your candor.

1. Fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me, fool me thrice proves that I am indeed a fool!

2. Her behavior is so extreme, she has to be a pathological liar. That means she is a full on sociopath with no "feelings" for anyone but herself. Her only concern is the power she can wield over others. In this case, it is pussy power over men.

3. He would have seen her personality disorder. They cannot help it and they are not all that good at faking being decent human beings for long. That is why they are known to go from one relationship to another as they burn through people.

I'm not one to scream, "FTDS" at every story that leaves a few loose ends, and I don't need a final confrontation here, as I certainly HOPE that he and Trina are through!

But to leave hanging on who the father is? That's not right!

“We didn't date, go out to dinner or go bowling or dancing” – Just because you’re “fuck buddies”, or FWB’s doesn’t mean you can’t go out!

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Amy

“We didn't date, go out to dinner or go bowling or dancing” – Just because you’re “fuck buddies”, or FWB’s doesn’t mean you can’t go out!

Fuck-buddies just get together for sex.

Friends with benefits on the other hand are friends who do the normal things that friends do together plus have sex with each other .

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Finish?

He never heard from her again.

Most likely reason?

The child was obviously Martin Keller's.

Scotty had a saying:

Fool me once, shame on you.

Fool me twice, shame on me.

If there was a third verse, it may go: Fool me three times, then I'm a fucking idiot.

An interesting read. Thanks for the offering.

and Trina as one evil manipulative bitch 2*

Finish the story. Four years in the Navy, he is a fucking dumb ass.

fuck me once shame on you

fuck me twice shame on me

fuck me three times you deserve it and everything that comes with it

she cheated and her took her back

she cheated again and he took her back again

I refuse to feel sorry for people who engage in abjectly stupid behavior

Three strikes are an out, but you don't need to get hit in the head with the ball three times. Once is enough. The central character is an IDIOT! She lied and betrayed him twice, and still he goes back for more? Sorry. Stories about fools just aren't that interesting.

to a bouncing baby boy. A DNA test won't be needed. Keller and I are both white and therefore can't be the babies father as it is black.

This bloke is a fucking moron, too stupid to be believable ⭐️⭐️

In an earlier comment regarding this JPB tale, I seem to have either done it poorly OR I missed a significant point. Either excuse is totally plausible, being a Bear Of Little Brain. Our Horny Hero never told Pregnant Pussy that he had caught her with Martin the first time. On the second, he did let her know he knew. P.Puss skipped that first interlude with Martin in her account of ‘the loser’ after they met in the seminar. That omission should have changed his response when she told him about being knocked up. Best would have been (IMHO) that he let her know she had TWICE misled him about her feelings for Martin, and that he was willing to wait until a DNA could verify his paternity before marriage or child support.

The story is interesting. The central character is still an idiot of immense proportion, but that can be interesting. He definitely thinks with the little head.

A dumber man has never been written in LW in its history. We've had some major wimps, losers, dirt bags, low lifes, trailer trash and idiots but this dude was such a putz it was an eye roll exercise to read it.

When this gem hit "I've missed you Rob. I know it is my own fault, but that doesn't change the fact that I've missed you and thought of you often. I'd like to think that you've occasionally thought of me." his level of putz hit epic proportions as any man on this planet would have laughed and been long gone before that laughter stopped ringing in her ears.

Lord have mercy! What an idiot. The only one dumber than him is Trina.

Why is it 90% of JPB's characters have had a brain bypass? The dumbass was hooked on her? Alcoholics are hooked on alcohol. Drug addicts are hooked on drugs. If they use them they already know exactly what will happen. Yes there are people that stupid of course, but they don't make up the majority of the population of planet earth. If they did the population would be much smaller because in most places, being that moronic is terminal.

More BS from JPB. This writer is so full of drivel that he cannot stop himself from driveling.

It is not the only place you can read absurdities but this guys really has it.

A woman is supposedly having a child and the main hero is about to marry her yet he does not have any connection to her family and has no idea where his intended wife could be other than her claim that she is taking care of aunt for three weeks. And even after being burned twice he is still not checking anything.

Now, I understand there are dumbasses, like JPB himself selling this crap to readers, but how comes that dumbass is all of a sudden enlighten and very rational. This stuff goes on in all JPB stories where women are town whores and men are idiots. Well, thanks for wasting my time, 1 star for you.

To those who tell that we should not complain because we are getting reading material for free. You are fools, wasting time on a garbage like this is a gain for a reader. If JPB is any worth as a writer he would not be posting hundreds of garbage stories for free. By the way, all his stories rated below 4 are nothing but utter crap and not worth reading.

Another one of "your usual" (crap). Typical JPB setting. The woman is a cheating lying slut, but even so the MC takes her back over and over again till the final cheating when apparently grows a pair of balls and gains a few brain cells.

To anonymous upset dude : hindsight is 20/20, eh?

The guy's what, 21? 22? Tell me you were that wise when you were that age but I won't believe you.

Nice story. Thanks for sharing.

Another repetitive story of JPBs. Young guy falls in love, let's the whore constantly walk all over him and cheat on him and then when she supposedly decides to commit and the wimp let's her, surprise, surprise, the whore shits on him again.

incomplete no rating

How can he go out with Amy on the Saturday after he caught Trina cheating,?He was supposed to be going to a bachelor party.

What a bitch-cunt!

Typical JPB story. Write three pages and still no real ending.

Fool me once, shame on you.

Fool me twice, shame on me.

Fool me three times.....

Where was I?

cuck .

she cheats , he takes her back .

she cheats again , he takes her back .

she cheats again , he takes her back .

gonna marry her , shes cheats , has been cheating the whole time .noises about breaking up but hinting about getting back together if the baby is his .

buuuuuuuuullllllsssshhhhhiiiiiiiit.

cuck faggot

fool me once, shame on you, fool me twice shame twice, shame on me, fool me a third time, time to see a psychiatrist.

Unfinished

I can see why you've been divorced 3 times, JPB. I assume you're writing your MC from a personal place, too stupid to know better.

With some people you have to wonder. How many times they have to get burned. Before they buy a clue.