by Vysis
Ending was fairly abrupt. The whole anal thing was a bit too much too soon for a just deflowered virgin. 4*
I am a 81yo widow lady who has been a avid reader of romance novels for my entire life. Mostly Harlequins, but others, too. I love them all. I found and started reading Literotica a few months ago and have mostly enjoyed it. I like the colorful language, although it can become overly explicit for my tastes. However, your work is really perfectly balanced, and the love in your characters is so incredibly sweet and real and warm and thrilling, and itinspires your readers to not only seek and find true love and true ROMANCE in their lives, but also to be better people, better friends, and more giving to their fellow inhabitants here on the third rock from the sun. Thank you for yourextraordinary writing, and please PLEASE favor us all with more of it. Elsie Keltner
Loved the story, when you think this was all in one day, some of it was a bit quick off the mark, I kept expecting the cop to come back and catch them at it. Five stars from me.
Really enjoyed your story, about what a world should really be like. This is only the second of your stories that I have read, but I will certainly be reading more! Thanx for the Read!
Oh yes, I join everyone in saying this was excellent. Also PLEASE continue the story a little. Just enough to get her stop saying "Sugar Daddy!" IF I were lucky enough to rescue someone from rough patch in their life and to have her call me sugar daddy, I don't think I'd care for it. But, after all, it is your story and you can do whatever you want with it.
the story was good and well written but when you jumped to the shower scene the anal part was way too fast considering many women in real life don't do it....slow down.. remember you did this all in one day.....
seabee
Just a nice saving the fair maiden story. Wish you would do more chapters for it.
5 Stars.
This was one of the best written mature stories here.
Nicely done, please keep the story going!
A nice romantic interlude with fun for both parties.
I hope you will consider following up on Carl and Trinity.
Ramjet
You are a brilliant writer. Your story is not only erotic but very touching as well. Full of mixed emotion for a very wet and horny girl at 2.36am. Thank you! May them lived happily ever after!
I like dogs too but their owners are even better. But I have never met any like Trinity and Butch yet.
His compassion for the dog turned into guardianship for the girl. She has a lot to give and has found someone she can trust who is willing to give without demanding recompense.
I feel elated for her.
This Story Has An Ending - At Trinity and beyond. Truly a story that could be an actual experience.
It's an excellent, sweet, touching story. Please write more and please give it a happy ending. There are far too few of those in the world. In here it can happen.
You've created some very believable and interesting characters. The dialogue and action are well-written and well-paced. The story is highly charged with eroticism, mixed with appropriate elements of caution and angst. I was drawn into your story to the point of forgetting that it was just a story. That's the mark of an excellent tale!
Loved reading about Trinity and her Sugar daddy... They need each other and they don't even realize how much yet.... Thank you for sharing this tale. I also found it to make me very wet. I just kept reading and really got into the story line. 5 Stars is a definite
Thank you for a great story and I do hope you will continue.
Two very likeable characters. I hope to hear lots more from them. I didn't trip over any errors and I appreciate that too,