All Comments on 'Trixi's Wedding Fun'

Good first story. Hot sex. Could have used some editing.

Loved the story; good setup, and given the time constraints, the lack of build-up was good. Loved the "Something borrowed, something blue" bit. More Trix stories!

Good first story. I liked the dialog - it gives the characters more depth and brings you into the action.

Good writing, need more grafic, but other wise good story. Keep writing some more. It gets better with practice.

Good stuff! Very enjoyable.

Well written and erotic.