All Comments on 'Trouble at the Biker Bar'

This has got to be the funniest story about a lot of sex I have ever read. Sometimes good work is hard!

Write some more, it's worth it.

and so full of fun and humor - really enjoyed reading it and had a good laugh too - well done.

Fantastic! You did a great job creating such a funny story. I loved the clipboard, and then the run-down of "services". Teriffic!

Stupid typo whines... on p.1

"shinny-black satin..." WTF is shinny-black", no spell-chequer I've used would ever accept that. ANF a few lines later: ..." shear-black,"... only sheep get sheared & what's wise, you used "sheer-black" just a few lines earlier.

I apologize for being such an SGN* here, but to those of us who learned spelling, grammar, & punctuation in the 50s & 60s this sort of things is like fingernails-on-a-blackboard. B out really spoils the flow of an otherwise-good story.

PS please keep sharing your imagination with us regardless of the SGN whiners like me [G,D,RLH] ** I do enjoy your stories

* Spelling & Grammar Nazi

** https://lmddgtfy.net/?q=g,d,r