All Comments on 'True Baseball Love'

by topwise

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
coulda been good, but

great idea for the story, but I thought it was too obvious it was written by a guy. hard to buy a lesbian story starting out like that...

Bridget69Bridget69over 16 years ago
A home run.

Nice to see lesbian erotica written from a male's perspective.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I thought it was perfect

and I was unable to guess it was a male writer. So write away, young man. YOu should be encouraged.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Not bad...

Obviously male-written from the start, but not bad, all the same. Although PLEASE, work on your spelling!

SwifthawkSwifthawkover 11 years ago
Meh, I don't understand

what difference does it make if an author of a story on lesbian erotica is either a man or a woman? Either the story is good or it's not, what's dangling between their legs doesn't make a lick of difference if you're a good writer. Yeah, yeah, I know that women know women, just like men know men, but with any kind of research, whether it be online, library or even life experience, one sex can certainly write about the other convincingly. Quite frankly, topwise, you're a good writer. The story is sexy and believable with the exception of mom's coming out to her son (I dunno, it just seemed like an after thought to me), but other than that loved the whole concept.

Sorry for the rant, I've seen those comments on several stories and when I saw that nearly every comment on this story mentioned it, it got my back up.

NC22371NC22371about 10 years ago
Awww

What a sweet story.

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenabout 7 years ago
Great story!

Being as how I had a romance with a woman 10 years older than me, back when I was in my early 20's, I always love a nice "April - August" romance story. This one was excellent, thank you for sharing it with us!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

I thoroughly enjoyed this story.

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