All Comments on 'True Grit Honey, Keep Going'

Not enough detail... too fast paced. Need to flush it out a lot... maybe divide it up into multiple chapters. It was okay but I found myself just skimming things once it got to the tub scene. I'd do a total rewrite.

This needs an editor so bad I'm not sure one would agree to take it. Add in unbelievable characters and disturbing behavior and its a solid 1 star story. I never leave bad reviews or rate this poorly either, so this one really stinks.

I forget if it was Oscar Wilde or Bernard Shaw who said that America and England are two nations separated by a common language. After reading this story I can’t help but believe that there’s a much greater divide between New Zealand and America, despite the common language.

Fun story.

Great Read !

I didn't want to put it down !

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Reminds me of Dudley Do-Right of the Canadian Mounted Police ... love those cartoons and liked this heroic tale.