All Comments on 'Truman High Ch. 02'

sad

can't wait for more chapters you should make this a series

go ahead...keep me hanging some more...mainthing you keep it coming...i'll be happy

and thus not as hot as it could have been,

if for example, he pretends to think she's Carly!

I enjoyed this, despite the predictable element. I just thought there was a need to spend a little longer on the places that count. For example, the sliding of the hand under the panties could have been an erotic masterpiece as the tips of his fingers search, expecting to encounter a rough terrain of coarse hair only to glide effortlessly over her shaven mons and parting the slick fattening lips of her willing cunt....Mmmmmm, the sensuality of a shaven haven...I love it, including my own, when it's freshly 'mown' (or is that 'moan'? lol). Thought you rushed a bit. Sorry, but got to be honest.

i'd be happier if this chapter was longer, but its still good. i hope you give us a happy ending incest story by chapter 3 :D and the fact that she is a virgin is just sweet & romantic & exciting *grins*

you can't finger a virgin if the hymen is intact especially not with two or more fingers. you must have slept through sex ed like 99% of the writers here delete and rewrite then run it through a GOOD EDITOR before reposting the series as is it SUCKS