All Comments on 'Trust'

You did a good job leading in with the thoughts of a character in a way that had me engaged. However, the technique you used was to make the "surprise" a surprise for the reader as well and it is one I have a hard time imagining anyone handling the way the character did. I know I didn't enjoy it. And I as the reader had no reason to trust the boyfriend. I'm sure others will love the story for the very reason I didn't like it, but oh well. Maybe this is of use to you. Maybe it isn't.

Loved the plot of the story, the way it lead up to her having three guys pleasuring her was awesome! Great job, loved the story!

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