by Rogue Writer
Your writting skills are growing, but what happened with your great sence of humour? It was present in all your stories, even when the going gets really tough, now this story is more and more depresing, black, without any hope...
The plot thickens ... that is an understatement. I've always enjoyed your characters and the complex and fascinating storyline is making this a terrific read. I can hardly wait to see what you've got planned for the next chapter.