All Comments on 'Trusting the Moment'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Gloriously sensual

And brilliantly erotic, romantic...vivid. Thank you for being more cerebral than the bulk of material on this site.

HollunderHollunderover 11 years ago

An excellent, well composed story.

The detailed description of the female protagonist evokes an atmosphere and mood of sensuality and intimacy.

In this atmosphere, a well structured and logical plot leads – smoothly linked – step by step to a hot and arousing climax.

All in all, a warm, believable vignette of a hot Chicago afternoon.

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