by Hea_2_sta
Oh god...That was wonderful...It was one of those stories that got me so hott I had to drag out my vibrator....Absolutely wonderful!
Absolutely loved this story. Had two orgasms and read it twice.
A lot of editing would have helped
Best story i have read in a long time, also covered a personal fantasy of mine, had me orgasming in minutes, such an erotic read
i really liked the concept and the details, but the editing was terrible. there are far too many grammatical errors, and i found myself getting too caught up in those to enjoy the story fully. if you just have someone edit it, this story would really benefit.
This story is so fucking hot. I've rubbed myself off so many times when reading it. Sometimes I don't even get to the second page before I cum. So erotic. Please please tell us what happens when they get upstairs!