All Comments on 'Truth or Dare'

FUCK YEAH!!

Make a movie and get somebody to write the story of the movie instead - it feels like you need some camera- and stage descriptions, but you got the story covered.

I would have voted that I hated it, but the story deserve ignorance - not hate (it's not good enough to be hated..)

should be he has to eat the cream pie from her pussy...now you got a story

Actually loved the story, i like stories with dialogue.

This is innovative! Please write more!

Wow. Fucking hot. I caaaaaammmmmeee soo HARD reading this thing!

I think all stories should be written like this.

I love this idea! It's extremely hot, and intriguing. There's something playful about it that makes it a turn on.

The only thing is, the buildup I crave in stories is lost by the presentation as a screenplay. You did a wonderful job for a screenplay, but I'd absolutely love to see this fleshed out into a story with descriptions and dialouge and buildups and climaxes just like you did here. I urge you to do it... the story idea is fantastic, and it definitely deserves to be written as one :).

This might be the first story I've read where it is primarily written like a stage script. Very simple premise, very erotic, very well done.

Wow! I thought this was so amazing I just had to show my whole family! They loved it! My grandma especially couldn't keep herself in check! It was incredible to see all of us joined together thanks to this story!

Im so glad I read this masterpiece. Now I feel like I can truly love my catfish again.

Wow! what a screenplay. Can not even begin to imagine all of the people and the pope you would hae gotten so moist. Well done, definitely got my motor running.

10/10 would read again

after reading this my dick was harder than Mike tyson in Mike tysons punch out.

nothing has gotten me this randy since '06

-Tyrone (Analfoxslayer69)

WOZZA! I haven't been this randy since the days when i worked as a pizza delivery boy.

ps. ASL any hot single in my area

kind regards Captain Dick Pizza

Best thing on literotica, hands down. Genius new way to tell a story.