by Storm62
I enjoyed the story, but at the point where they spent an hour drinking,and talking. "JULIE" looked at him, who is julie? and where did she come from.
I've been toying with a part 3, It may well get finished sometime.
Kinda confusing, I thought cousin marriage is legal in the UK. What's with this "I can't have you" stuff?
As I think I understand it, there has to be a certain degree of separation between the blood lines. For example, I can't marry my neice or the daughter of my mothers sibling, but i could marry the daughter of the sibling of my mothers siblings partner. I hope that makes sense.
What was her name Julie or Emily? Because you kept going back and forth. Other than that great story!
Would love to hear more about these two how they might have stayed together had children so on
This story is TOO SHORT. It is a nice tug tale; still, it could use some fleshing-out to help with appreciating these two obviously-in-love cousins.
Still, a superb tale!
Great follow-up story, but it still left it unfinished. I give it a 4 for writing and a 3 for not being complete. If it was completed and long enough to really get into it, I would give it a 5.