All Comments on 'Truth or Dare, Roxy?'

by ShatteredPortrait

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Far fetched

The only reason I didn't love this story was because she was supposed to be a virgin. Regardless of how horny you are, it does hurt a bit your first time (take it from a woman who knows), and with 3 guys, she'd be in real pain after.

Otherwise, I liked the story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Brilliant!

I absolutely loved this one! The only thing I found missing was that after Roxy had given them the greenlight to do anything, no-one tried to fuck her arse. A basement full of teenage boys, and NOBODY tries anal?

RossDanielsRossDanielsalmost 14 years ago
I'm a sucker . . .

. . . for "truth or dare" stories! And this was a good one. Nicely done.

CleardiamondCleardiamondalmost 14 years ago

i <3 truth or dare situations.. this was very fun.. and believable!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great story

just an absolutely great story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
sweet story dare is the way to go

dare is the way to go

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

best erotic story so far good job :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great storry

I loved it. Only thing that i caught was that you might want to change utopia for euphoria.

Euphoria=bliss pleasure,

Utopia= perfect society

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Amazing

I lived every minute of it from start to end! Please write more, you write beautifuly!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
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i have read this multiple times before, and now, maybe a year or so later, have many mixed thoughts. this has a good story line, but, not to offend, your writing skill doesn't seem to be that of an adult. then again, i can't be one to speak. but, overall, it's a good story, although the writing could be improved a bit.

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