by ShatteredPortrait
The only reason I didn't love this story was because she was supposed to be a virgin. Regardless of how horny you are, it does hurt a bit your first time (take it from a woman who knows), and with 3 guys, she'd be in real pain after.
Otherwise, I liked the story!
I absolutely loved this one! The only thing I found missing was that after Roxy had given them the greenlight to do anything, no-one tried to fuck her arse. A basement full of teenage boys, and NOBODY tries anal?
. . . for "truth or dare" stories! And this was a good one. Nicely done.
I loved it. Only thing that i caught was that you might want to change utopia for euphoria.
Euphoria=bliss pleasure,
Utopia= perfect society
I lived every minute of it from start to end! Please write more, you write beautifuly!
i have read this multiple times before, and now, maybe a year or so later, have many mixed thoughts. this has a good story line, but, not to offend, your writing skill doesn't seem to be that of an adult. then again, i can't be one to speak. but, overall, it's a good story, although the writing could be improved a bit.