All Comments on 'Trying Something New'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Nice!

A little short but still hot. Thanks, looking forward to something longer with some foreplay.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Feeling Wet

new to Literotica & I know now I will be back, I just have to pop off to go & play with my dildo as my pussy is now twitching & needing to be played with...thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Learn some basics

Why do so many amateur writers on this site insist on writing in the present tense? Have you ever read any literature that was written in the present tense? No, of course not. Stay in the past since that is when the incident occured. Also, get a better proof reader. I'm just saying this because the content is better than average and showed some imagination. Keep working.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
sexy

This story got me so wet that my clit is still throbbing

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