All Comments on 'Turn to the Dark'

Wth? Why would you submit an unfinished story? 5 stars up til the abrupt end, 1 star for no disclaimer that it was unfinished at the beginning. Waste of time.

WHILE MY PREFERENCE IS READING FEM.DOM. I FOUND THIS TO BE INTERESTING.ALSO I WOULD HAVE GRANTED YOU A HIGHER SCORE ,HAD YOU COMPLETED THIS STORY

HUH?????

What a story! I love every line and thoroughly enjoyed it! A dream to come true. What I would do to be in your place!

Finish it, please.

It was working very nicely. I would've liked a less abrupt cliff hanger.

Quite nice until the sudden end... though the names are so ridiculous as to be utterly lulsy.

That was a brilliant story I just want to see how far you can take it !!

Thanks

I really like your stuff and this is the best start of any of your story lines, keep it going!!

please more!!!!!

...so, please continue with your unfinished story.

It was going along so well...please keep writing!

It was a disgusting story.

The forced BJ? Don't make me laugh. They called the other guy stubby.

If you need inspiration Michelle, I can be your Dom.

Could have been 5 star if not abandoned. 1*